I said that I could feel the attempt to create a story, but it's just not there for me. One could maybe make up a story based on it, but that's not photography, that's novelisation.
The strength of this image is in the triangle between the man's central white foot, the woman's red dress and right (trailing) foot, which are both near the outer edge of the frame. It's compositional and to a certain degree, colour contrast based. Which makes for a strong, energetic visual, but I don't get any more from it than that. Hence why for me, it falls closer to the snapshot end of the spectrum (not the same as calling it a snapshot).
If the intention was to create a slightly abstract detail vignette that could be sold to dance studios, though... Then it's spot-on.